Hints and tips:
...“The pace was unsustainable.”...
...Stolzenburg focuses on the campaign that has gathered pace over the past 50 years to exterminate the invaders, particularly rats and mice, and give the remaining native animals and birds a chance of recovery...
...The rhythm is too one-pace; the imaginary society needed more character and detailing; the mongrel mix of accents (American, cockney, Gervais’s lightly toasted English yokel) says “nowhere and everywhere...
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